10-27-2016, 04:00 AM
RiverNotch,
Yeah that's a valid argument. I probably should have put some white space in between the two. The first is an experience, the second is a statement that one may or may not apply to the first, but it was not meant to be a continuation of the first.
Maybe:
She mistook me with a smile.
Error perceived she frowned
and turned away.
- - -
Hope like mist
dissipates before the sun.
As far as the music, I would love to sleater her kinny!
As my degree is in Literature is presupposes that I am a cunning linguist.
dale
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Bueller,
Thanks for the read and your kind comments.
dale
Yeah that's a valid argument. I probably should have put some white space in between the two. The first is an experience, the second is a statement that one may or may not apply to the first, but it was not meant to be a continuation of the first.
Maybe:
She mistook me with a smile.
Error perceived she frowned
and turned away.
- - -
Hope like mist
dissipates before the sun.
As far as the music, I would love to sleater her kinny!
As my degree is in Literature is presupposes that I am a cunning linguist. dale
________________________________________
Bueller,
Thanks for the read and your kind comments.
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.