Smear [edit]
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I could see this shortened to make it more succinct. Example, not a suggestion.

Denial: drawing
with black india ink,
covering all things
perfectly, indelibly
until you feel
that (the) warm-wet warning
on one (the) edge of your hand.(which one?)

Best,

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Smear [edit] - by dukealien - 10-25-2016, 10:23 PM
RE: Smear - by kolemath - 10-26-2016, 02:58 AM
RE: Smear - by Erthona - 10-26-2016, 06:56 AM
RE: Smear - by RiverNotch - 10-26-2016, 11:10 PM
RE: Smear [edit] - by dukealien - 10-27-2016, 07:40 AM



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