10-25-2016, 08:09 AM
Hi, Mark, it's recommended that you post your edit above the original by editing the OP. That way anyone new to the thread will critique the current version. Welcome to the site.
Sorry El I missed that one, should have pointed it out. Good catch. dale
Sorry El I missed that one, should have pointed it out. Good catch. dale
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips