10-22-2016, 01:32 PM
The problems here are vacillations among condemnation, exploration and explanation, as if the poet were bursting with a need to write while trying to find a unifying theme with language meandering from borderline formal to blue collar argot the next. Still, empty headed, soulless beauty and its entanglements always deserve a good poem, especially if the one suffering with them may have problems of his own.

