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-iso EDIT 1
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10-22-2016, 08:21 AM
Achebe is extraordinarily astute. Aside from the first line, I was trying to justify the last two lines of rhyme. I think I can make this read, but not sure how without dense metaphors! Thanks for pointing out these things, that's why I'm here!
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
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-iso EDIT 1 - by CRNDLSM - 10-22-2016, 02:55 AM
RE: -iso (my first sonnet, probly only sonnet) - by newmystic - 10-22-2016, 03:50 AM
RE: -iso (my first sonnet, probly only sonnet) - by CRNDLSM - 10-22-2016, 06:09 AM
RE: -iso (my first sonnet, probly only sonnet) - by Achebe - 10-22-2016, 07:37 AM
RE: -iso (my first sonnet, probly only sonnet) - by CRNDLSM - 10-22-2016, 08:21 AM
RE: -iso EDIT 1 - by rollingbrianjones - 10-23-2016, 12:43 PM
RE: -iso EDIT 1 - by CRNDLSM - 10-24-2016, 02:25 AM
RE: -iso EDIT 1 - by rollingbrianjones - 11-12-2016, 10:16 AM
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