10-22-2016, 07:43 AM
kole - the piece has improved dramatically. Credit to you.
I particularly liked:
when the floor vibrations smooth at night
we glide by light of memory
as midnight thirst stirs you awake
our worlds collide
I particularly liked:
when the floor vibrations smooth at night
we glide by light of memory
as midnight thirst stirs you awake
our worlds collide
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe

