10-21-2016, 10:47 AM
Although thematically the topic is a bit overdone, your perception of it adds a freshness to it. S2 is excellent, I think that S1 could be chopped down some as it is a bit verbose and repetitive, making it seem a bit forced. As this is in mild I'll leave it at that.
Best,
dale
Best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.