10-21-2016, 10:04 AM
what a lovely and helpful critique. I agree with the need for punctuation. I'm thankful for your kind words as well. sometimes you don't know if what you create will seem awful.
Matthew
Matthew
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RE: broken ship - by ellajam - 10-21-2016, 09:30 AM
RE: broken ship - by newmystic - 10-21-2016, 10:04 AM
RE: broken ship - by ellajam - 10-21-2016, 10:14 AM
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RE: broken ship - by newmystic - 10-22-2016, 12:32 AM
RE: broken ship [new version] - by newmystic - 10-25-2016, 02:08 PM
RE: broken ship [new version] - by rowens - 10-26-2016, 12:00 AM
RE: broken ship [new version] - by newmystic - 10-26-2016, 01:55 AM
RE: broken ship [new version] - by rowens - 10-26-2016, 03:28 AM
RE: broken ship [newest version] - by newmystic - 10-26-2016, 04:06 AM
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RE: broken ship [newest version] - by newmystic - 10-29-2016, 04:28 AM
RE: broken ship [newest version] - by rowens - 10-29-2016, 06:19 AM
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