10-20-2016, 01:30 PM
Haha yes ending much more amusing but reads a bit awkwardly!
You maybe did this- but in case you didn't I'd read aloud and then write a similarly "themed"(?
) ending that rolls off the tongue with the same ease that the previous lines really, really do. Nice work!
You maybe did this- but in case you didn't I'd read aloud and then write a similarly "themed"(?
) ending that rolls off the tongue with the same ease that the previous lines really, really do. Nice work!