Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision

Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision

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10-20-2016, 10:37 AM

I think this edit does a lot to clarify your meaning. Breaking into two stanzas makes it easier to create the parallels required to make the poem work.

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Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Lizzie - 08-11-2016, 12:26 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by kolemath - 08-11-2016, 12:49 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Achebe - 08-11-2016, 09:13 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Shay - 08-12-2016, 04:41 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by just mercedes - 08-12-2016, 05:21 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by monablackbird - 08-12-2016, 11:29 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by comandoartjunky - 08-13-2016, 01:27 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by BW BRINE - 08-13-2016, 05:00 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Lizzie - 08-13-2016, 10:52 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by cvanshelton - 08-17-2016, 02:34 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Lizzie - 08-18-2016, 07:22 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by stampede331 - 08-26-2016, 03:42 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Lizzie - 08-27-2016, 05:57 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by maximuswolf - 09-01-2016, 09:33 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Lizzie - 09-01-2016, 12:36 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by loboflo - 09-17-2016, 06:29 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Lizzie - 09-17-2016, 02:25 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by heslopian - 09-20-2016, 10:13 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Lizzie - 09-21-2016, 04:05 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by QDeathstar - 09-21-2016, 11:44 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Lizzie - 09-22-2016, 03:41 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by QDeathstar - 09-22-2016, 10:49 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by EarthwareVessel - 09-25-2016, 10:51 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Lizzie - 09-26-2016, 11:27 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by nikkisto - 09-25-2016, 10:13 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Donald Q. - 09-28-2016, 06:08 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Lizzie - 09-28-2016, 11:53 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Donald Q. - 09-28-2016, 05:15 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Lizzie - 09-28-2016, 11:16 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Lizzie - 10-15-2016, 07:02 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor - by Achebe - 10-15-2016, 07:18 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Donald Q. - 10-15-2016, 02:28 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Lizzie - 10-16-2016, 07:16 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Donald Q. - 10-18-2016, 02:29 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Lizzie - 10-20-2016, 08:01 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by QDeathstar - 10-20-2016, 10:37 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by newmystic - 10-21-2016, 03:36 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Erthona - 10-21-2016, 10:47 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Lizzie - 10-21-2016, 06:42 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Achebe - 10-21-2016, 06:59 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Lizzie - 10-21-2016, 07:06 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Achebe - 10-21-2016, 11:04 AM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Lizzie - 10-21-2016, 06:31 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Achebe - 10-21-2016, 06:41 PM

RE: Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision - by Todd - 10-22-2016, 04:04 AM

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