10-20-2016, 05:42 AM
Rhyming is ok, but I think if you are writing about something serious rhyming doesn't work. If you're writing for some joyous occasion, rhyme away... But, if your writing about the death of an unborn fetus, rhyming will never work.
Abort
The doc got to work
and with a bit of a jerk,
pulled out parts of a fetus
that looked like uncle Cletus.
Maybe it does work?
Abort
The doc got to work
and with a bit of a jerk,
pulled out parts of a fetus
that looked like uncle Cletus.
Maybe it does work?