10-18-2016, 02:45 PM
(10-18-2016, 01:33 PM)Brownlie Wrote: [quote='just mercedes' pid='218768' dateline='1476762825']
No. I'm just talking about that particular line with the word repentance in it. Very low level comments about words you may be able to alter a bit to give them more meaning if you feel it's necessary.
Those words in italics are quoted from a sermon in a Free Church of Scotland Church in Evanton in 1836. They struck me as so evil that I preserved them when I came across them, researching my family. I don't know how important it is, that they stay, or go. I have to think about it. I guess I'm still too invested in the poem's subject, and need to look at what the poem needs now.