10-18-2016, 12:53 PM
Thanks, Brownlie. I'll think over what you said - do you mean, cut the rest of the poem altogether, from 'repentance'?
It's important to me that there's no person left alive to grieve, which I use to describe the normal death rites, such as grave, burial, and headstone. Unburied bones don't rest easy.
It's important to me that there's no person left alive to grieve, which I use to describe the normal death rites, such as grave, burial, and headstone. Unburied bones don't rest easy.