10-17-2016, 09:28 PM
The blank spot at the end is annoying and pretentious...and why even start with "Billy Boy" if you're going to toss him over for fags , slags, and hags? Nice sonics mixed with the anti-tonics. I used to live in that world, I thought you had to in order to write poetry, thank god that ego-stage is over with. Overall a kind of after-birth type of poem. Some might see it as lovely, while most see it as disgusting and and have no idea what to do with it.
Best,
dale
Best,
dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.