PWoF 2016 - Topic 09 - Sept. 30
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(10-01-2016, 01:17 PM)dukealien Wrote:  Ode to a Grecian Kylix

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Divine thy form is, round and shallow-dished
glazed black, red-figured as wise ancients wished
inscribed with seated star-crowned goddess Night
thou, kylix, complex, elegant
Greek potters’ most extravagant
production of their wheels and fancy’s flight.

Yet in thy elegance lies well-concealed
Greek practicality, at times revealed
in curving little handles left and right
by artisans unlettered
whose forms cannot be bettered
production of their wheels and fancy’s flight.

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While underneath a Maenad hangs for dead
her disembodied spouse’s pop-eyed head
its owners found this handled kylix great:
space for emotive mythic ballads
Chian wine, hot soup, or salads -
with one peg upon the wall
they’d hang kylix lest it fall
just try that with a bowl or china plate.
Much enjoyed, well done rhyme scheme, I especially liked the way you made ballads/salads work.
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PWoF 2016 - Topic 09 - Sept. 30 - by rayheinrich - 09-30-2016, 04:14 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 09 - Sept. 30 - by just mercedes - 09-30-2016, 05:50 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 09 - Sept. 30 - by kolemath - 10-01-2016, 04:53 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 09 - Sept. 30 - by ellajam - 10-15-2016, 08:21 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 09 - Sept. 30 - by Lizzie - 10-03-2016, 05:46 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 09 - Sept. 30 - by Keith - 10-15-2016, 04:51 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 09 - Sept. 30 - by MakTheRov - 01-10-2017, 04:38 AM



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