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Deliverance
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10-14-2016, 11:23 AM
a likable poem crn. could maybe alter some of the meter so each corresponding line is the same. it starts off well with the six line verse. would be best to leave as is or make it the same throughout. i'd also suggest playing round with the refrain so it doesn't jar. worth the read.
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Deliverance - by CRNDLSM - 10-13-2016, 06:05 AM
RE: Deliverance - by rowens - 10-13-2016, 10:03 AM
RE: Deliverance - by CRNDLSM - 10-14-2016, 05:22 AM
RE: Deliverance - by RiverNotch - 10-13-2016, 04:32 PM
RE: Deliverance - by Bueller - 10-14-2016, 11:09 AM
RE: Deliverance - by billy - 10-14-2016, 11:23 AM
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