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message from roachland
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10-13-2016, 09:34 AM
posted an edit. trying to draw out character more and make sentences less disjointed. to achebe's point on punctuation, i thought mechanics was inappropriate for the subject matter. i'm trying to strip human likenesses from the poem's speaker, a roach. not sure if that's working..
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message from roachland - by kolemath - 10-12-2016, 04:26 AM
RE: Roaches - by Brownlie - 10-12-2016, 12:46 PM
RE: Roaches - by Achebe - 10-12-2016, 04:54 PM
RE: Roaches - by kolemath - 10-12-2016, 07:33 PM
RE: Roaches - by kolemath - 10-13-2016, 09:34 AM
RE: Roaches - by Lizzie - 10-13-2016, 11:58 AM
RE: Roaches - by Brownlie - 10-13-2016, 01:46 PM
RE: Roaches - by Todd - 10-13-2016, 01:49 PM
RE: from roachland - by kolemath - 10-14-2016, 09:14 AM
RE: from roachland - by Todd - 10-14-2016, 10:24 AM
RE: from roachland - by kolemath - 10-14-2016, 10:36 AM
RE: from roachland - by kolemath - 10-16-2016, 12:39 AM
RE: from roachland - by Todd - 10-16-2016, 01:08 AM
RE: from roachland - by kolemath - 10-16-2016, 01:20 AM
RE: from roachland - by kolemath - 10-21-2016, 05:09 AM
RE: from roachland - by Achebe - 10-22-2016, 07:43 AM
RE: from roachland - by mitsuch - 10-22-2016, 05:19 PM
RE: message from roachland - by kolemath - 10-22-2016, 10:11 PM
RE: message from roachland - by Todd - 10-23-2016, 12:24 AM
RE: message from roachland - by Lizzie - 10-23-2016, 01:17 AM
RE: message from roachland - by Bueller - 10-25-2016, 07:51 AM
RE: message from roachland - by kolemath - 10-25-2016, 09:42 AM
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