Engulfed
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Thanks for the comments folks. This is my first attempt at ecopoetry so the last line tries to implicate all people in the consequences without being didactic I hope

Thanks for the comments on conciseness and word accuracy Lizzy Brown and reflection. I was thinking Matthew and Haiti Alec.
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Engulfed - by kolemath - 10-09-2016, 08:44 AM
RE: Engulfed - by Lizzie - 10-10-2016, 04:01 AM
RE: Engulfed - by Reflection - 10-10-2016, 06:00 AM
RE: Engulfed - by Brownlie - 10-10-2016, 01:17 PM
RE: Engulfed - by Alic Elliot - 10-10-2016, 01:28 PM
RE: Engulfed - by kolemath - 10-11-2016, 10:14 PM
RE: Engulfed - by kolemath - 10-16-2016, 12:59 AM
RE: Engulfed - by Sparkydashforth - 12-05-2016, 01:59 AM



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