The demagogue

[kolemath]

The voice in this one is brilliant. I can hear the bastard quite well...

A few suggestions on this

I love china. 
The other day I met a Chinese, and he smiled at me. 
They love me. 

I love flori-da.
I built a big hotel, and everybody loves me. 
I told them keep the piping just the way it is.
Now it's like Las Vegas,
with that show about Atlantis.
It's so great.

There's something like a hive of bees.
What are these bees?
Who said anything about bees?
I don't know any bees?

Cupid shot me with a big gold brick.
Now everybody loves me.
I first saw myself.
The rest,
I grab 'em by the pussy. 

Smile and wave. Smile and wave. 
Line please. Line please.
"Isis, Isis, Isis"
(way hotter than Jesus by the way)
Does anybody hear those bees?

Way too big to fail.
So I told him, take the Taj Mahal.
I don't need India.
The Chinese love me. 

Ouch the little bastard moved on me. Here, the voice shifts. These words are too advanced for the fool. Maybe put them in italics and disassociate the fool from an omniscient narrator. This is more commentary than a fool's comment.
Tied his tiny, metronomic heart 
to a worthless, backbone-like sword. 

Kill the honey bees and choke the world. 
I am Moloch's drunken product. So drop I here
Hitler's nothing but a boring uncle.

Only all of them in concert can do anything about it. Again not th voice of the fool but of resistance to him

What's that humming?
Isn't there a line for that? I hear him here
Who cares? Just keep squishing them. This is like the demon on his shoulder
It just keeps getting louder. Omniscient

Great read. Great work with voice. A few places bring in other voices for me though. Build on that?