10-11-2016, 09:53 PM
[quote='RiverNotch' pid='218314' dateline='1476108850']
The Graduate
And here I am, standing on the precipice, precipice is better for the front behind image
alone. The view behind me
is the same as the view before: cloud, the wind
sweeping away all footprints.
I am cold -- blue -- battered -- to me these words are more melodramatic than torn clothes
all my clothes now torn, tattered,
and my digits made few -- as if
I were made old by youth. Drop 'I were?'
And here you tell me
only the downward trail climb? Clothes can tare when rock climbing. Perhaps descent?
remains?
Maybe end with down or whichever word you choose. ..the only climb that's left is down...something like that
The Graduate
And here I am, standing on the precipice, precipice is better for the front behind image
alone. The view behind me
is the same as the view before: cloud, the wind
sweeping away all footprints.
I am cold -- blue -- battered -- to me these words are more melodramatic than torn clothes
all my clothes now torn, tattered,
and my digits made few -- as if
I were made old by youth. Drop 'I were?'
And here you tell me
only the downward trail climb? Clothes can tare when rock climbing. Perhaps descent?
remains?
Maybe end with down or whichever word you choose. ..the only climb that's left is down...something like that
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