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The Graduate
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10-11-2016, 03:30 PM
(10-11-2016, 03:17 PM)RiverNotch Wrote: Thanks! You're right about edge, I think. The earlier draft was precipice, but now I'm torn between that and the more correct summit....and I'm not entirely sure about the construction of the last stanza....thoughts?If there's a road, there's no reason for your clothes to be tattered unlesss you rolled your way up. 'Track' would be a better word.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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The Graduate - by RiverNotch - 10-10-2016, 11:14 PM
RE: The Graduate - by kolemath - 10-11-2016, 07:50 AM
RE: The Graduate - by RiverNotch - 10-11-2016, 03:17 PM
RE: The Graduate - by Achebe - 10-11-2016, 03:30 PM
RE: The Graduate - by RiverNotch - 10-11-2016, 04:35 PM
RE: The Graduate - by Achebe - 10-11-2016, 05:03 PM
RE: The Graduate - by RiverNotch - 10-11-2016, 05:07 PM
RE: The Graduate - by kolemath - 10-11-2016, 09:53 PM
RE: The Graduate - by RiverNotch - 10-13-2016, 02:55 PM
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