10-11-2016, 01:31 PM
Thanks, all, for the critique! I think I may refine this a bit more then move it to the Novice forum, as Todd says there's more to be touched on here.
In response to you, Todd, this poem ended up more personal than others. While not directly, the state of mind I was in at the time I was writing heavily influenced it.
In response to you, Todd, this poem ended up more personal than others. While not directly, the state of mind I was in at the time I was writing heavily influenced it.
Ashes to ashes
Dust to dustEdgy sayings
“Inspirational" stuff