Staying Dark
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I had to read the first line a couple of times since in our vernacular, pumping a plumber's helper would mean getting exceedingly friendly with the tradesman's apprentice...

The black blobs do conjure up such an appetising image. Hair, once jettisoned from its bodily roots, is really a most unattractive thing -- but I do hope you manage to retain your dignified gre(a)y for as long as it takes for you to at least knit yourself a bonnet.

On a critical level (because I feel compelled to mention), this works well as a metaphor for the departure of youth. All those years down the drain, and the surface is stagnant. Cheery thoughts all round.
It could be worse
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Staying Dark - by dukealien - 10-10-2016, 10:48 AM
RE: Staying Dark - by Leanne - 10-10-2016, 10:56 AM
RE: Staying Dark - by dukealien - 10-10-2016, 11:11 AM
RE: Staying Dark - by Achebe - 10-10-2016, 11:14 AM
RE: Staying Dark - by just mercedes - 10-10-2016, 11:56 AM
RE: Staying Dark - by RiverNotch - 10-10-2016, 01:48 PM



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