Sonnet I
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(10-07-2016, 05:36 AM)Rogo Wrote:  Sonnet I



“I”  “ebbing petal”  “folds half-open”  “against jet quiet”


“Am a body”  “of parts”  “amassed”  “in living distances”


“Rejecting”  “place, ceded”  “ within this computer”  “of stars”


“A face”  “of faces, it blinks”
Reads like matrix, the first four lines of a sonnet, are the next four lines written, interesting Cool
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Sonnet I - by Rogo - 10-07-2016, 05:36 AM
RE: Sonnet I - by CRNDLSM - 10-07-2016, 06:53 AM
RE: Sonnet I - by tectak - 10-08-2016, 07:42 PM
RE: Sonnet I - by RiverNotch - 10-08-2016, 11:47 PM
RE: Sonnet I - by Donald Q. - 10-09-2016, 12:23 AM
RE: Sonnet I - by Rogo - 10-09-2016, 10:12 AM
RE: Sonnet I - by Leanne - 10-09-2016, 10:27 AM
RE: Sonnet I - by Reflection - 10-10-2016, 06:52 AM
RE: Sonnet I - by Achebe - 10-10-2016, 05:17 PM



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