No Caws Whatsoever

[kolemath]

A crow took flight in silence,
the absence of caws, cause for
full quasi treatment. i like the concept but could be expressed in fewer than three lines
Viewed by the flock elders poem gets going here
as a black block among them, good image
he was given wide distance
because of his flaws.
He was breaking flock laws. because of distance or claws? kind of confusing, as given distance can't be it since the clawless crow didn't do that, but no claws is so many lines away..

Look, as the crow disappears
into mystery´s jaws
that linger and give unnecessary line
everyone involved strong pause. good sounds but don't know what these lines mean. everyone in the flock?
The sky composes itself cool idea
through that pin prick
of the vanishing crow,
violating all cosmic crow saws. do what now? interestind idea of the crow to the sky but crow saws?

Angry, thieving, but flock faithful, ok angry as an outcast but why thieving? 
he´ll return with solutions;
this side of the sky draws him. i like the idea of the outcast coming back to save the day

Carrying the cure in his beak
he’s unable to caw, though he aches good lines
to announce his return.
The flock, seeing him
without hearing caws, shun him the flock shuns and fills
and fill the air with multiple cause,
molesting the air in full flutter,
more like vengeful macaws the outcasters are fake, i like it
than a murder of crows 
with acute claws. screw themselves over for not accepting someone different. it works

overall a good one; rhyme might be getting in the way in some cases. thanks for the read