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It's a great read for someone who despises winter, namely me. I especially like how the nearly sentimental ending is cured by mosquitoes. This form confuses me though I see it getting more popular. Why'd you choose it? Shouldn't the two sides read as poems of their own? Not to say that sections don't.

I gotta get further south but not too redneck south..
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< winter's coming > - by rayheinrich - 10-09-2016, 12:10 PM
RE: < winter's coming > - by milo - 10-09-2016, 12:16 PM
RE: < winter's coming > - by rayheinrich - 10-09-2016, 06:05 PM
RE: < winter's coming > - by milo - 10-10-2016, 12:00 AM
RE: < winter's coming > - by Achebe - 10-09-2016, 04:05 PM
RE: < winter's coming > - by kolemath - 10-09-2016, 11:04 PM
RE: < winter's coming > - by rayheinrich - 05-12-2017, 07:35 AM
RE: < winter's coming > - by vagabond - 05-12-2017, 06:09 AM
RE: < winter's coming > - by ellajam - 05-12-2017, 10:55 AM
RE: < winter's coming > - by rayheinrich - 05-13-2017, 04:31 PM



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