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10-09-2016, 04:05 PM
I like the particularity of the observations - for instance, the shorts are still there but thicker, and the grasses are still growing, but more slowly. I like how the ending loops back to the beginning - a device that never stales. And the picture makes it perfect.
But is 'quieting' a word? I thought it was 'quietening'?
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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< winter's coming > - by rayheinrich - 10-09-2016, 12:10 PM
RE: < winter's coming > - by milo - 10-09-2016, 12:16 PM
RE: < winter's coming > - by rayheinrich - 10-09-2016, 06:05 PM
RE: < winter's coming > - by milo - 10-10-2016, 12:00 AM
RE: < winter's coming > - by Achebe - 10-09-2016, 04:05 PM
RE: < winter's coming > - by kolemath - 10-09-2016, 11:04 PM
RE: < winter's coming > - by rayheinrich - 05-12-2017, 07:35 AM
RE: < winter's coming > - by vagabond - 05-12-2017, 06:09 AM
RE: < winter's coming > - by ellajam - 05-12-2017, 10:55 AM
RE: < winter's coming > - by rayheinrich - 05-13-2017, 04:31 PM
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