10-09-2016, 06:11 AM
I can't really follow with worthwhile criticism about your work, but I think your title could use adjusting. Paralytically Metaphoric is fun to think about, Im still trying to decipher it, but as the only words I don't understand in themselves, I don't think it belongs here. The Negativity of An Ever Favoured Face sounds nice, matches other descriptions, but also sounds tired. Hope this is useful
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