10-08-2016, 07:42 PM
(10-07-2016, 05:36 AM)Rogo Wrote: Sonnet IPlease remember which forum you are in. If you want this to be moved just say so. It is unlikely that you will receive useful crit in the Serious Workshopping Forum.
“I” “ebbing petal” “folds half-open” “against jet quiet”
“Am a body” “of parts” “amassed” “in living distances”
“Rejecting” “place, ceded” “ within this computer” “of stars”
“A face” “of faces, it blinks”
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