10-07-2016, 06:53 AM
It's a sonnet because of the syllables? The quotations mean nothing to me since they are all quotes. Are they all cliches? are they all random connects from within your computer that just happened to make rational sentences? Reformatted here to consider each quote
I
ebbing petal
folds half open
against jet quiet (i like jet quiet, like jet black, yet jets can be very loud)
am a body
of parts
amassed
in living distances (what are living distances, like miles apaart intellectually?)
rejecting
place, ceded
within this computer
of stars
a face
of faces, it blinks, (the face blinks, the computer blinks)
In a way this reminds me of a contract signing, (I, the underlined, am all these things, and this) Sonnet I seems like you have many more of these, and I'd like to see a connection to them
I
ebbing petal
folds half open
against jet quiet (i like jet quiet, like jet black, yet jets can be very loud)
am a body
of parts
amassed
in living distances (what are living distances, like miles apaart intellectually?)
rejecting
place, ceded
within this computer
of stars
a face
of faces, it blinks, (the face blinks, the computer blinks)
In a way this reminds me of a contract signing, (I, the underlined, am all these things, and this) Sonnet I seems like you have many more of these, and I'd like to see a connection to them
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