10-04-2016, 10:52 PM
I did not interpret abuse from this poem, but the tragic silence parents endure being forced to reason with a three year old. In public no one sees the sheer struggle it must have took just to get pants on a kid. Years of adamant defiance parents must lovingly accept, still buying the kid a moothie. Took a couple days and toddler wrestling match to reach this conclusion, maybe if some of the voices were a little more defined in the scene jumping.
(09-30-2016, 09:13 AM)kolemath Wrote: Three-Year-Old with Dad
Coffee shop public, crowded murmur, wondering
what below is. What's under there? Every stranger's face.
What's behind these faces, Dad?
My missing pants.
“You need pants on to go outside,” he said that day.
“I has pants on, Daddy.”
He looked at my bare legs. “Are you fibbing?” He asked in stone.
“No.”
“Do you have on pants?”
“Yes, Daddy.”
“Time out!”
I can’t say the shame,
only write today
a chair flew across the room, screams, "Liar!"
And screaming, and suffocating hands,
and stone hands, and hands
I can't stand covering tears and gasps,
hands over my face, suffocating masks.
"I don't has on pants, Dad."
Coffee shop public, I look around, wonder what below is.
They don't know what's under here. What's under there? I wonder.
"Your child is so cute," a woman says, as she passes
“What a great dad, bringing his child to the coffee shop,” her friend agrees.
"Thanks for the moothie, Dad."
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches

