10-03-2016, 03:54 PM
Hi, Jack 
Shamefully little crit here, just wanted to say that I loved the last two lines. I've read it several times over the past week or two, and they strike me every time. Yeah, just lovely. The imagery is on point and there's so much meaning in those two little lines. Good work
lizziep
Shamefully little crit here, just wanted to say that I loved the last two lines. I've read it several times over the past week or two, and they strike me every time. Yeah, just lovely. The imagery is on point and there's so much meaning in those two little lines. Good work
lizziep