10-01-2016, 08:38 PM
Thanks for your thoughts guys, I'm going to put a couple of them to use right now, and maybe a few more laterĀ
Namely, I'm removing the "a" before crescendo, and change "ignoring the anguish" to "embracing the anguish".
Namely, I'm removing the "a" before crescendo, and change "ignoring the anguish" to "embracing the anguish".

