09-25-2016, 12:32 AM
These topics are getting tougher...
(09-25-2016, 12:05 AM)RiverNotch Wrote: The Soldier and the Merchant's WifeNicely done. It took me a few goes to figure out what the spacing was about.. I'm a bit thick.
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It was the sea ---
It was the sea ---
that opened up
for me, that swallowed
the ship what stole
my virtue from my home.
O sister, --- O brother,
We two, We one How i Bleed
tonight, Cybele
Red wounds my womb ---
Homunculus! my Ceyx, if He'd lived,
Your Son
should i bear now
a Lion, a Hive of Honey ---
Hungry ---
Hungry ---
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or should i regret
the opening of gates
and gifts
O young, and streets
my full of love,
my wretched and seas
seductress ---

