PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24
#9
These topics are getting tougher...

(09-25-2016, 12:05 AM)RiverNotch Wrote:  The Soldier and the Merchant's Wife

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It was the sea ---
It was the sea ---
               that opened up
for me,        that swallowed
the ship       what stole
my virtue from my home.
O sister,  --- O brother,
We two, We one How i Bleed
               tonight, Cybele
Red            wounds my womb ---
Homunculus!    my Ceyx, if He'd lived,
Your Son      
               should i bear now
a Lion,        a Hive of Honey ---
Hungry ---
Hungry ---

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               or should i regret
               the opening of gates
               and gifts
O young,       and streets
my full of love,
my wretched    and seas
seductress ---
Nicely done. It took me a few goes to figure out what the spacing was about.. I'm a bit thick. Big Grin
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Messages In This Thread
PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24 - by rayheinrich - 09-24-2016, 04:04 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24 - by just mercedes - 09-24-2016, 05:16 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24 - by Achebe - 09-25-2016, 08:30 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24 - by just mercedes - 09-25-2016, 08:55 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24 - by Achebe - 09-25-2016, 09:12 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24 - by just mercedes - 09-25-2016, 09:26 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24 - by QDeathstar - 09-25-2016, 12:32 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24 - by kolemath - 09-25-2016, 05:00 AM
Candy Glass - by dukealien - 09-25-2016, 05:32 AM
RE: Candy Glass - by rayheinrich - 09-25-2016, 06:43 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24 - by just mercedes - 09-25-2016, 02:52 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24 - by Lizzie - 09-25-2016, 03:45 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24 - by Keith - 09-25-2016, 04:40 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 03 - Sept. 24 - by Achebe - 09-27-2016, 06:07 AM



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