My Afternoon Light
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(09-17-2016, 08:08 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:  'Write one right now' you say with a smile
As I pull pen and paper from out of a pile
I scribble some words and after a while
It forms in its own free flowing style
I try not to rush as the sun makes the climb
But I hastily write some ridiculous rhyme
Like stealing a salad from an insolent mime
Who's rolling around in a fuscia-green slime
I see you staring with cynical eyes
Until curiosity compels you to rise
To catch a quick peak and then criticize
My feeble attempt to improvise
'Now let me see it on the count of five'
But I snatch it away where your hand makes a dive
Suddenly, instantly, you understand I've
written something much more than mere moments contrive
I summon the courage before taking flight
Vulnerable to any venomous bite
To say nothing could bring me a greater delight
Than seeing you smile in this afternoon light
Better than a lot of raps. See Dr. Dre in the following: 'Never let me slip, ‘cause if I slip then I'm slippin'
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My Afternoon Light - by CRNDLSM - 09-17-2016, 08:08 AM
RE: My Afternoon Light - by CRNDLSM - 09-23-2016, 10:02 AM
RE: My Afternoon Light - by Brownlie - 09-24-2016, 10:11 PM
RE: My Afternoon Light - by RiverNotch - 09-24-2016, 11:27 PM
RE: My Afternoon Light - by CRNDLSM - 09-25-2016, 10:05 AM



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