PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23

[cvanshelton]

Thanks. and thanks for sharing. yours is my favourite. i can say that, right?

Thanks so much; I won't stop you

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I appreciate how the ending you wrote brings a peacefulness to the poem. I wondered about the swiftly spinning spirals become the breeze that turned the page. And, I wondered about a book containing a perfect law being loosely bound. Very thought provoking.

All is made in minor forms
like shape-shifting beasts
and immortal mutant cells.

I have set in motion
every swiftly spinning spiral.

I have broken up the stars
that are fatally fated to be
separate supernovae.

In a loosely bound book,
I have written a perfect law;
a breeze turns the page.

I can't think of titles...