09-24-2016, 01:56 PM
(09-23-2016, 06:46 PM)shemthepenman Wrote: Thanks. and thanks for sharing. yours is my favourite. i can say that, right?Thanks so much; I won't stop you

I appreciate how the ending you wrote brings a peacefulness to the poem. I wondered about the swiftly spinning spirals become the breeze that turned the page. And, I wondered about a book containing a perfect law being loosely bound. Very thought provoking.
(09-24-2016, 12:56 PM)UselessBlueprint Wrote: All is made in minor forms
like shape-shifting beasts
and immortal mutant cells.
I have set in motion
every swiftly spinning spiral.
I have broken up the stars
that are fatally fated to be
separate supernovae.
In a loosely bound book,
I have written a perfect law;
a breeze turns the page.


