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PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23

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09-24-2016, 06:21 AM

You Go, Karl

So it bothers you
does it, Karl,
that One Who’s only spirit
living invisibly in old, opaque
writings (so far as you can see)
is their comfort
lulls them peaceably to sleep
provides remunerative
opportunities to some
supplying what the rest
regularly need
including a way to analyze
My created world?

“Opiate of the people,” am I?
Well, fine, then, Karl.
You be their crack.

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PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by rayheinrich - 09-23-2016, 03:59 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 04:46 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by rayheinrich - 09-23-2016, 05:00 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by cvanshelton - 09-24-2016, 02:36 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 05:13 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by shemthepenman - 09-23-2016, 06:46 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by rayheinrich - 09-23-2016, 09:26 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by shemthepenman - 09-24-2016, 05:05 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by cvanshelton - 09-24-2016, 01:56 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by Lizzie - 09-24-2016, 02:17 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by Quixilated - 09-24-2016, 04:08 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by just mercedes - 09-24-2016, 04:23 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by cvanshelton - 09-24-2016, 04:52 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by shemthepenman - 09-24-2016, 05:16 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by shemthepenman - 09-24-2016, 04:40 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by rayheinrich - 09-24-2016, 05:14 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by Keith - 09-24-2016, 05:59 AM

You Go, Karl - by dukealien - 09-24-2016, 06:21 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by just mercedes - 09-24-2016, 07:42 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by Keith - 09-28-2016, 03:21 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by QDeathstar - 09-24-2016, 09:52 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by Lizzie - 09-24-2016, 09:58 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by kolemath - 09-24-2016, 10:19 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by cvanshelton - 09-24-2016, 11:34 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by just mercedes - 09-24-2016, 11:52 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by kolemath - 09-24-2016, 10:44 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by rayheinrich - 09-29-2016, 07:53 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by UselessBlueprint - 09-24-2016, 12:56 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by just mercedes - 09-24-2016, 03:02 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by Brownlie - 09-24-2016, 07:02 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by RiverNotch - 09-24-2016, 08:34 PM

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