PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23
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(09-24-2016, 04:23 AM)just mercedes Wrote:  C - Very Biblical-feeling scene, last two lines of the first stanza my favourite. I giggled at 'till' though - I think you meant 'tiller'
Oops and shit. Too much in a hurry. Thanks! Changed it
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PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by rayheinrich - 09-23-2016, 03:59 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 04:46 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 05:13 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by Lizzie - 09-24-2016, 02:17 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by just mercedes - 09-24-2016, 04:23 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by cvanshelton - 09-24-2016, 04:52 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by Keith - 09-24-2016, 05:59 AM
You Go, Karl - by dukealien - 09-24-2016, 06:21 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by just mercedes - 09-24-2016, 07:42 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by Keith - 09-28-2016, 03:21 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by Lizzie - 09-24-2016, 09:58 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by kolemath - 09-24-2016, 10:19 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by just mercedes - 09-24-2016, 11:52 AM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by kolemath - 09-24-2016, 10:44 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by just mercedes - 09-24-2016, 03:02 PM
RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 02 - Sept. 23 - by Brownlie - 09-24-2016, 07:02 PM



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