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09-23-2016, 11:15 AM

(09-23-2016, 11:10 AM)RiverNotch Wrote:
(09-23-2016, 11:09 AM)ellajam Wrote:
(09-23-2016, 10:54 AM)just mercedes Wrote: This isn't new, but I thought it fitted in here ...

eating at the beach ~
twice a day the waves roll in
for their take-away
Sharp. mmm, eating at the beach, everything tastes twice as good, I'd like to follow those waves and do it twice a day.
And it's 5-7-5! Bonus points!

ha, it's been so long I didn't even notice, sharp twice over. Smile

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PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by rayheinrich - 09-22-2016, 04:16 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-22-2016, 06:39 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-22-2016, 08:25 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Achebe - 09-23-2016, 06:14 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 06:19 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by cvanshelton - 09-23-2016, 03:21 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Quixilated - 09-22-2016, 11:24 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Lizzie - 09-24-2016, 08:56 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by QDeathstar - 09-23-2016, 12:28 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by billy - 09-23-2016, 06:53 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by shemthepenman - 09-23-2016, 01:48 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 02:17 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Lizzie - 09-23-2016, 10:05 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 06:36 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 06:58 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 07:18 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by kolemath - 09-23-2016, 07:19 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Lizzie - 09-23-2016, 07:27 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by rayheinrich - 09-27-2016, 05:44 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by kolemath - 09-23-2016, 07:42 AM

Food of Fast Gods - by dukealien - 09-23-2016, 07:43 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by QDeathstar - 09-23-2016, 08:47 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by HaleINthewind - 09-23-2016, 09:22 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 10:01 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by HaleINthewind - 09-23-2016, 10:15 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 10:28 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by RiverNotch - 09-23-2016, 10:54 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 10:54 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 11:09 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by RiverNotch - 09-23-2016, 11:10 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 11:15 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by RiverNotch - 09-23-2016, 11:26 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-23-2016, 11:45 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by ellajam - 09-23-2016, 11:49 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by UselessBlueprint - 09-23-2016, 11:55 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by billy - 09-23-2016, 11:56 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by HaleINthewind - 09-23-2016, 12:16 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Leanne - 09-23-2016, 12:39 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by cvanshelton - 09-23-2016, 12:39 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Lizzie - 09-23-2016, 01:58 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by HaleINthewind - 09-23-2016, 12:56 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by kolemath - 09-23-2016, 07:15 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by rayheinrich - 09-23-2016, 04:04 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by HaleINthewind - 09-23-2016, 10:29 PM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by Keith - 09-24-2016, 05:14 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by HaleINthewind - 09-24-2016, 07:39 AM

RE: PWoF 2016 - Topic 01 - Sept. 22 - by just mercedes - 09-24-2016, 08:03 AM

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