09-20-2016, 10:19 AM
This is a response to the first edit of the poem. It's a nice little bit of comic verse, elegantly structured, amusing (I laughed), and relate-able in its depiction of the pathetic teenage-male experience, remembered as an adult swamped with junk mail. Thank you for the read. - Jack xxx
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

