Skeleton On The Sea Floor -- revision

[Lizzie]

Beautiful!  This poem very eloquently related the feelings of depression and the sudden feeling of being lost.  Also, the metaphors and similes were so artfully written.  They were stunning.  The only critique that I have is possibly when repeating that first line of "it just appeared", perhaps you could emphasize that a bit more possibly by either making that a separate paragraph or maybe indenting a bit?  Either way, very well written poem.

You're right, I think some kind of break there would be nice. Thanks for the tip!