2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month
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(02-16-2015, 10:28 PM)ellajam Wrote:  I lay myself down in the snow
and spread my arms out one last time.
My snowy angels used to glow,
now they lie dull. The cold, sublime,
has numbed the last of burning pain,
destroyed what's left of joy and art.
Let snowdrifts wear the crimson stain,
an icicle straight through my heart.


Big Grin I got crimson in there. (edit, tectak)
I really like this- especially the bit about the angels. It leaves a deep impression
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2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by Todd - 02-16-2015, 10:01 PM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by pinkalligator - 09-15-2016, 01:01 PM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 02-17-2015, 07:32 AM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 02-17-2015, 08:04 AM
RE: 2nd Annual Poems About Suicide Month - by just mercedes - 04-28-2016, 09:43 AM



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