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Beautiful read, the meter pulls me right along as I go through your day and life with you. I see the sky through your windows, smell the yeast through its stages, feel the warmth.of the room and the company and the mix of the comfort of familiarity, melancholy and satisfaction.

I remember this poem from what I find is an old NaPM thread, it feels as familiar as if I had read it yesterday. A fine poem.

mmmmm in all ways
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< recipe > - by rayheinrich - 09-14-2016, 02:44 PM
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RE: < recipe > - by rayheinrich - 09-15-2016, 03:29 PM
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