Beautifully Bound

[homer1950]

Hi DJester,

Very enjoyable Poem thanks for the read. Some minor thoughts for your consideration

Thanks, Homer

Those luscious, golden locks on high
Like water drops fall from the sky------Long vine like hair probably wouldn't feel like rain falling- luscious feels thick -full

And dare to snare a prideful beast,
For such tendrils is no feat.

Sweet to touch, and soft to feel;
One has never felt so real -------- This line feels a little forced for the sake of rhyming 
But suddenly they sway away,
A river's peace I still remain.

Until the surface, struck by rock,
Sends ripples down upon my heart
Will these vines let loose of me,
And leave my soul to wander free.