Messenger of God

[Karnifex]

hi karni, how do you see it as good writing if you don't understand it? try and give a bit more reason in the feedback /mod

good writings dared, i like the theme that you have given to it. Grammatically correct from what i see, but what's the meaning behind this? it is to me a little bit unclear. I wish you good luck, as i am a beginner myself and i wish to hear some critiques from you soon! Cheers