09-13-2016, 08:09 AM
With your clarification, I read it again, and actually enjoyed it much better even. I am excited to see what critiques others have. A lot of people offer some really good feedback! 
Thanks for the suggestion. I will look into his work!

Thanks for the suggestion. I will look into his work!
"If you cannot be a poet, be the poem." - David Carradine

