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even though embarrassment can be anything, i can't help but think of the walk of shame..ha

(09-13-2016, 01:09 AM)Wjames Wrote:  The gristled tooth, white tongue from tooth to white to tongue is interesting
throbbing sunrise embarassment *embarrassmentĀ 
can not be cured with fresh air
and pancakes. great image to lighten the mood

It festers like a corpse in a cave,
and wakes with the bats oh you look like that? sorry..walk of shame reading
when it's time to eat. good loop back to pancakes but i'm confused about how it connects to the other images in this stanza
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Awake - by Wjames - 09-13-2016, 01:09 AM
RE: Awake - by kolemath - 09-13-2016, 02:00 AM
RE: Awake - by just mercedes - 09-13-2016, 07:57 AM
RE: Awake - by Wjames - 09-15-2016, 01:25 PM
RE: Awake - by RiverNotch - 09-15-2016, 07:33 PM
RE: Awake - by Wjames - 09-17-2016, 05:41 PM



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