09-12-2016, 10:21 AM
Very cautious at the moment. I'm trying to maintain its dual subjects each time I change a word, without adding anything unnecessary. The missing foot in the very final is actually a typo. "as a vict'ry song" is how it should appear. I will adjust this soon.
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"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona