Imagining Disaster, previously "Stuck," edit 1

Imagining Disaster, previously "Stuck," edit 1

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09-12-2016, 10:20 AM

I absolutely love the build up to the end of this poem. The way you built the idea of being a "...corroded tin man..." and then flipped the poem 180 degrees to turn it into something completely different made this poem one of the best reads I have ever read on this site.

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Imagining Disaster, previously "Stuck," edit 1 - by Lizzie - 06-06-2016, 12:38 PM

RE: Stuck - by Achebe - 06-06-2016, 05:55 PM

RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 07-05-2016, 03:40 PM

RE: Stuck - by ariii - 06-08-2016, 11:40 AM

RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 06-09-2016, 07:34 AM

RE: Stuck - by Vanity - 06-08-2016, 04:25 PM

RE: Stuck - by lam523 - 06-21-2016, 07:51 AM

RE: Stuck - by LunaDeLore - 06-22-2016, 12:20 PM

RE: Stuck - by Lizzie - 06-22-2016, 04:09 PM

RE: Stuck - by ellajam - 06-22-2016, 06:37 PM