Night Terrors EDIT

[kolemath]

thanks to all the people who took the time to read and comment on a boring first draft. i couldn't look at this one for a while, but there ya go..sometimes our sensitive BS is tough to reexamine.


the first draft had no point, random images free of any connection to plot, abundant abstractions, and was a labor to read. i've revised for these points and tried to purge for excessive sentiment.

@achebe, lizziep, mercedes, duke, rich, river THANKS!